2022年第一首诗，最近都没有写，因为对自己写作能力的深深不满。。。 -doris99(欢喜心) @卡尔加里华人论坛:卡尔加里枫下论坛 The Rolia Forum of Calgary

2022年第一首诗，最近都没有写，因为对自己写作能力的深深不满。。。

doris99(欢喜心)

Jonah Kagen - Broken (Official Video)

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精华！ -lepapillon(Le Papillon); 2022-1-4 (#14242154@0) +1

谢谢喜欢😃 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242173@0)

没那么爱过别人，最爱自己 💕 -sophia654321(sophia); 2022-1-4 (#14242161@0) +1

你这是最好的呀🌞 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242178@0)

我一直觉得生命的长度不应该是唯一重要的因素，很多时候大部分人都很在意生命的长度，其实生命的深度和广度同样重要，甚至可能更重要。。。 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242187@0) +1

这个其实是仁者见仁智者见智的判断。海明威六十岁就自杀了。但是他一生看到过的，经历过的，感受过的，比许多活过八九十岁的人只多不少。 -the_dumb_one(悔不该); 2022-1-4 (#14242232@0) +1

每个人的一生所得是个定量，长了就会稀释，短了就会浓厚。情，才，钱，知识，阅历，经历等等等等。活好每一天，终生无悔恨。 -bingjiang(bingjiang); 2022-1-4 (#14242266@0) +1

不太同意“定量”的说法。在同一个时间维度中去感受更为强烈的intensity，往往意味着更加宽厚和广博的生命体验。 -the_dumb_one(悔不该); 2022-1-4 (#14242298@0) +1

我也觉得深度和广与长度是没有冲突的 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242312@0)

海明威的歌 🌟 -sophia654321(sophia); 2022-1-4 {676} (#14242317@0) +2

海嗚威《你的承諾》[Lyrics MV]

作詞：朱其民作曲：朱其民編曲：德正明監製：周峰、包胡爾查烏雲遮蔽了天空　窗外又是陰雨時候傘下的戀人中　不再有你我手牽手一切過了太久我們的十字路口　下一站是誰在等候你我的方向盤　卻向著相反的彼岸終點還是分開告別你我離開之後　這回憶可以保留當初那美好的感動你說你記住了　不為彼此難過過各自的生活Oh baby　你答應我...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8n4bwR2EbJY

好听，谢谢！，😛🌞 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14243100@0)

是的。比如说同样是一周四十小时的钟点，有人做一份工，有人做三份工，强度和体验都不一样。 -the_dumb_one(悔不该); 2022-1-4 (#14242330@0) +1

这个说不好 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242309@0)

生命的长短，不是谁能控制的，自杀除外。 -steven8888(夜太黑); 2022-1-4 (#14243003@0)

一定程度上 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 {20} (#14243010@0)
我觉得人是可以控制的

就看见了两个半句“不能--呼吸” -bingjiang(bingjiang); 2022-1-4 (#14242254@0) +1

为什么会这样？打倒水手！。。。你把图片拉大了看 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242291@0)

舒舒服服的就好 -mangyu(laohuang); 2022-1-4 (#14242311@0) +2

开心就好~ -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242316@0)

你好有故事耶，等着你娓娓道来 -mangyu(laohuang); 2022-1-4 (#14242341@0) +1

也许是电影看多了情歌听多了。。。：） -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242734@0)

悲从中来，没有经历就没有深刻体会，这是啥情况 -hash(哈希); 2022-1-4 (#14242334@0) +1

如果我说是我想象的。。。你们会不会打我？LOL -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242737@0)

会走火入魔，还是写些阳光些比较好。好像你的诗都是这个调调，与人设不符 -hash(哈希); 2022-1-4 (#14242767@0) +1

噢。。。我努力吧。。。不过我没有什么人设，就是随心所欲：） -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242818@0)

不着急慢慢来，会写得好起来的 -moonhalf(减肥减多久); 2022-1-4 (#14242343@0) +1

谢谢鼓励，🌞 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242739@0)

好诗 -cricketkiller(白牙青); 2022-1-4 (#14242345@0) +1

谢谢鼓励呀，😁 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242742@0)

肉联新年第一首诗是🐮的！ -anexplorer(页于); 2022-1-4 (#14242469@0) +1

谢谢你还记得牛🐮🌞 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242743@0)

诗和远方，你都已经拥有🌸🌸 -evelyn123(Eva); 2022-1-4 (#14242542@0) +1

嗯，感恩， even more than that.... -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242745@0)

鹅学着写点诗，但感觉还是土，没有仙气。。。比如：鹅悄不眼地梭过了2021，张开大嘴迎接新的2022.。。。 -bd2020(21); 2022-1-4 (#14242553@0) +1

你明明文质彬彬偏要装粗旷😛 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242749@0)

难道跟那个他有关？ -pumba(Hakuna Matata); 2022-1-4 (#14242566@0) +1

他是谁？ -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242752@0)

缺啥想啥 -x2y(xfer); 2022-1-4 (#14242601@0) +1

被你看出来了。。。五行缺爱 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242755@0)

Evermore -steven8888(夜太黑); 2022-1-4 {2679} (#14242683@0) +3

[Taylor Swift:]
Gray November
I've been down since July
Motion capture
Put me in a bad light

I replay my footsteps on each stepping stone
Trying to find the one where I went wrong
Writing letters
Addressed to the fire

And I was catching my breath
Staring out an open window
Catching my death
And I couldn't be sure
I had a feeling so peculiar
That this pain would be for
Evermore

Hey December
Guess I'm feeling unmoored
Can't remember
What I used to fight for

I rewind the tape but all it does is pause
On the very moment all was lost
Sending signals
To be double-crossed

[Taylor Swift and Justin Vernon:]
And I was catching my breath
Barefoot in the wildest winter
Catching my death
And I couldn't be sure
I had a feeling so peculiar
That this pain would be for
Evermore
(Evermore)

[Justin Vernon:]
Can't not think of all the cost
And the things that will be lost
Oh, can we just get a pause?
To be certain we'll be tall again
Whether weather be the frost
Or the violence of the dog days
I'm on waves, out being tossed
Is there a line that I could just go cross?

[Taylor Swift and Justin Vernon:]
And when I was shipwrecked (Can't think of all the cost)
I thought of you (All the things that will be lost now)
In the cracks of light (Can we just get a pause?)
I dreamed of you (To be certain we'll be tall again)
(If you think of all the costs)
It was real enough (Whether weather be the frost)
To get me through (Or the violence of the dog days)
(Or the violence of the dog days)
(Out on waves, being tossed)
(I'm on waves, out being tossed)
I swear (Is there a line that we could just go cross?)
You were there

And I was catching my breath
Floors of a cabin creaking under my step
And I couldn't be sure
I had a feeling so peculiar
This pain wouldn't be for
Evermore
Evermore
Evermore
This pain wouldn't be for evermore
Evermore

Taylor Swift - evermore (Official Lyric Video) ft. Bon Iver

Official lyric video by Taylor Swift ft. Bon Iver performing “evermore” – off her evermore album. Listen to the album here: https://taylor.lnk.to/evermorealb...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EXLgZZE072g

lovely -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242760@0) +1

给加个一👍 -eleclan(eleclan); 2022-1-4 (#14242701@0) +1

谢谢帅哥一直的鼓励！🌞😁 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242761@0) +1

我confess,这首诗有个人经历和一些想象力在里面。。。昨天半夜醒来给老妈打过电话后听歌，就是那里面的那首“broken” 还有这里的这首“cold little heart"..然后突然就要写。。。于是就是这首诗。。。谢谢大家喜欢~ -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 {531} (#14242829@0)

Michael Kiwanuka - Cold Little Heart (Official Video)

Listen to the Mercury Prize winning album ’KIWANUKA' now: https://michaelkiwanuka.lnk.to/KiwanukaIDMichael Kiwanuka - Cold Little Heart (Official Video)Dire...

https://youtu.be/nOubjLM9Cbc

嗯。跟这个人是谁关系不大，是自己的情绪。我们有时把一个人想象得完美，来安放自己的“作天作地”的心情😄 找不到恰当的形容词，随便吧 -returntoffice(等等); 2022-1-18 (#14283171@0)

我明白你的意思，恋爱的感觉不局限于某个人。。。融入是全身心。。。 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-19 (#14283827@0)

你到底想要什么样的男人？搞糊涂了 -111111(快乐老家); 2022-1-4 (#14242984@0) +1

快乐同学，何出此言？ -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14242988@0)

又这又那的，糊涂了。一个诗词是不是应该思路清晰啊？ -111111(快乐老家); 2022-1-4 (#14243046@0)

哈哈，你太可爱啦 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14243090@0)

又得罪人了，对不起🧎‍♀️🧎‍♀️ -111111(快乐老家); 2022-1-4 (#14243308@0)

智美有男人，正在调教ing。 -steven8888(夜太黑); 2022-1-4 (#14242996@0) +1

哈哈，无论怎样，我以前就说过，我可以把自己照顾好，把日子过好。。。谢谢大家关心 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 {198} (#14243015@0) +2

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此处有片片😅 -mangyu(laohuang); 2022-1-4 (#14243312@0)

你看过吧？有人说要看，刚才放了下 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-4 (#14243494@0)

欢喜是才女啊！ -yyrrmom(青山如是); 2022-1-17 (#14279758@0) +1

谢谢才女喜欢，，，没有，就是瞎玩：） -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-17 (#14280364@0)

好湿👍 -meng2010(慢慢路); 2022-1-18 (#14283083@0)

谢谢 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-18 (#14283828@0)

好诗，👍 -sweettooth(吃四方); 2022-1-19 (#14284838@0) +1

谢谢喜欢：） -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-19 (#14285176@0) +1

以后多写。 -sweettooth(吃四方); 2022-1-19 (#14285523@0)

谢谢谢谢，你们不烦我以后可以经常分享😊 -doris99(欢喜心); 2022-1-19 (#14285698@0) +1

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2022年第一首诗，最近都没有写，因为对自己写作能力的深深不满。。。

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