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如不介意，随便说两句。 and 用的太多了，不但没有理由，有的还破坏了语法结构的正确性。

gagstrip(gagstrip)
When the time is right, people will go in their own separate directions, having gotten what they needed from the relationship to prepare them for the next step.
语法正确，句型别扭，似乎是故意绕口
in their own separate directions, 语义不通

So we should love passionately and without attachment. When it is time to say farewell, to do it with appreciation. No remorse, no regret, no ill feeling. And we move on with our own lives, getting ready for the next encounter. 整段的结构和句法凌乱， 既不象诗， 又不象文。
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Last Updated: 2003-12-28
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  • 枫下佳缘 / 情爱悠悠 / 饺子行乐人生系列之 爱情新解（1） -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-27 {1023} (#1532627@0)
    • Great Ideas.....By the way, next time please pay more attention to the grammar. -weme(MetalGear); 2003-12-27 (#1532630@0)
      • would you please point out for me?:) -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-27 (#1532632@0)
      • Never. There is one thing I always do and one thing I could only do is telling you that there are something need to be corrected. So, you have to figure it out by yourself. That is the rule ..... :) -weme(MetalGear); 2003-12-27 (#1532636@0)
    • 更正：not kelp, should be kept -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-27 (#1532634@0)
      • I am pretty sure there are more and more....not like that simple and easy.... -weme(MetalGear); 2003-12-27 (#1532639@0)
        • that is all right:-) -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-27 (#1532643@0)
      • 您更正的也是错的。我就不明白你为什么要用被动语态。您讲话不是用第一人称吗？怎么要用被动的呢？而且不要用过去时态。唉。。。。 -weme(MetalGear); 2003-12-27 (#1532645@0)
        • it is a typo, man....kept not kelp....thanks anyhow -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-27 (#1532647@0)
    • 1.2.3 -mssg(mssg); 2003-12-27 {215} (#1532652@0)
      1. In fact, there is no the “ONE” for some people
      2. In fact, there is the “ONE” for some people
      3. In fact, there is never a “ONE” for some people

      The question comes to who I am, and what I choose to be.
      • true! -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-27 (#1532654@0)
    • do you know who is the right person you are going to meet? I do not think you are ready to meet enyone randomly. -allrichest(ifilucky); 2003-12-27 {104} (#1532696@0)
      see 众里寻他, read the posters, it will be very clear, that anyone has some conditions to meet another.
    • 如不介意，随便说两句。 and 用的太多了，不但没有理由，有的还破坏了语法结构的正确性。 -gagstrip(gagstrip); 2003-12-28 {520} (#1533815@0)
      When the time is right, people will go in their own separate directions, having gotten what they needed from the relationship to prepare them for the next step.
      语法正确，句型别扭，似乎是故意绕口
      in their own separate directions, 语义不通

      So we should love passionately and without attachment. When it is time to say farewell, to do it with appreciation. No remorse, no regret, no ill feeling. And we move on with our own lives, getting ready for the next encounter. 整段的结构和句法凌乱， 既不象诗， 又不象文。
      • 谢谢指正。：）以后请继续指正 -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-28 (#1533829@0)
        • 声明：纯属个人喜好，本人英文都讲不好，谈何指正 -gagstrip(gagstrip); 2003-12-28 (#1533850@0)
    • 一篇极好的文章,深入的审视和沉思,IMHO,文法并无问题,也许我不认为饺子文章的目的是要做语法的范文,文章流畅清晰的表达了爱的反省和"爱"生存的本意.. 写的好. 请继续 -lubx(黑白世界*悠悠黑白); 2003-12-28 (#1534053@0)
      • 谢！我又看了一下你的照片专辑，发现里面有不少“香艳比基尼”照，早知道找你要照片了：） -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-28 (#1534076@0)
        • 我的“香艳比基尼”照, :D 也是喔, 我也觉得自己该大的地方大, 还小的地方小, 如果偶是女人, 应该是不错的, :DD -lubx(黑白世界*悠悠黑白); 2003-12-28 (#1534168@0)
          • 哈哈，你拍的florida bikini beauties -dropoutinmiami(饺子-随波逐流2004年); 2003-12-28 (#1534213@0)
            • 呵呵真有意思 -u523(为人民); 2004-1-2 (#1541127@0)
    • If you love someone, I mean hot love, don't get married with him/her. There may fit or not fit, but the key point is that they could not fit forever. ... -xyz123(bluesky); 2003-12-28 {869} (#1534094@0)
      It is nature that people keep on seeking for new things, the same case to love and marrage. If a couple fail to adjust to the relationship to (Qin Qing) after 5 years, the marriage or love will be in danger. This is not simple saying true or wrong, it is nature in fact. You may think about the case that the one you love, you could not sleep even for one day no seeing in the past, he/she is still that pretty, lovely and in good personality. How come you are not atttacted by these excellent characteristics: you got too familiar and see no special. On he other hand, you may get to be attracted by someone who is new, stranger even with same or not so good as you ex-lover. Nothing is changed except your feeling and experience.

      The idea may not accepted by most people, but it may be good way to always take you resposibility, in the mean time, make new friends.

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