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7岁女儿做文 (女儿想famous, 她说二个同学上过报纸, 我让她自己想办法. 她说要建一网页(近7岁), 这个苯妈做不到. 我说到可以把你的作文贴到rolia, 她在期待有人读.)

qianwanli(幸福猪第二)

Chelsea has written four books that based on the sound of music. She fell in love with the sound of music. When she watched it she felt like getting married. Chelsea thought about Bell in beauty and the beast. So I thought I would dress Maria in a pretty dress and give her some beautiful blond hair. I also made her some beautiful high heels. With lots of story creation and imagination she finally made it come true. I thought I would add some kittens to make it sweet. Also I noticed the sound of music did not have an happy ending. So I squeezed a happy ending in here and said they lived happily ever after. I watched that because my school is presenting the sound of music in the spring concert. Why does Rolf attack the Vontrap’s? That’s what I would like to know. Did they make it to Swizerland?

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枫下家园 / 望子成龙 / 7岁女儿做文 (女儿想famous, 她说二个同学上过报纸, 我让她自己想办法. 她说要建一网页(近7岁), 这个苯妈做不到. 我说到可以把你的作文贴到rolia, 她在期待有人读.) -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 {807} (#2933760@0)
Chelsea has written four books that based on the sound of music. She fell in love with the sound of music. When she watched it she felt like getting married. Chelsea thought about Bell in beauty and the beast. So I thought I would dress Maria in a pretty dress and give her some beautiful blond hair. I also made her some beautiful high heels. With lots of story creation and imagination she finally made it come true. I thought I would add some kittens to make it sweet. Also I noticed the sound of music did not have an happy ending. So I squeezed a happy ending in here and said they lived happily ever after. I watched that because my school is presenting the sound of music in the spring concert. Why does Rolf attack the Vontrap’s? That’s what I would like to know. Did they make it to Swizerland?

您的错别字也太多了吧 -001isbetter(001-is-better); 2006-4-28 (#2933838@0)

作文是一年级女儿自己写的。 -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2933855@0)

做文和苯妈是你写的吧? -001isbetter(001-is-better); 2006-4-28 (#2933954@0)

虚心接受意见，努力提高自己。（改了一个字，你没看见） -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2933987@0)

Good job. -rollor(Rollor); 2006-4-28 (#2934009@0)

谢谢 -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2934021@0)
谢教育家 -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2934072@0)

Tell her I like it and ask her to write more. I want to learn everthing she makes. -rollor(Rollor); 2006-4-28 (#2934173@0)

再次感谢教育家。 -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2935152@0)

问一下，她作文中的问题你们解答了吗？还是等着她自己去探索？尤其是 why attack 那个问题，比较 tricky。 -rollor(Rollor); 2006-4-28 (#2936238@0)

没答，不称职。刚开完音乐会，又非去挑芭蕾，现正想办法如何把她其他作品输入电脑交给教育家。（上一篇是她自己写在电脑里的） -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2936263@0)
她抱着地球仪找Switzerland和奥地利，还要我带她去哪里。最好找到那段border. -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2936294@0)

女儿小诗一首（今晨听说文章有人读，顿时来了精神，做一首小诗） -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-29 {196} (#2936725@0)
Trees

Trees are green, Trees are brown,
Trees have color all around.
Trees are strong, Trees are long.
Trees belong to you and mom
Trees are bad, Trees are glad, Trees are even really sad.

挺押韵的，不错。 -lisa2(乐了); 2006-4-29 (#2936901@0)

thanks -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-29 (#2936912@0)

很好很好。如果把 you and mom 改成 mom and dad，似乎就更好了。 -rollor(Rollor); 2006-4-29 (#2937970@0)

谢谢。 -qianwanli(选择); 2006-4-29 (#2937977@0)

写得真不错,不愧是大名校出来D,一会让明明学习一下...记得演出时叫上俺哈...:))) -yihan(逸涵); 2006-4-28 {88} (#2934225@0)
另外,回国时可以找位计算机人才给她做个声文图并茂的BLOG,一准让她们班的小孩子们羡慕S...哈哈

抱歉，我刚从concert 回来，非常隆重成功。我激动半天。票只限二张。下次不让爸爸去。我想给你看看录像，没准对童声合唱团有帮助。大篇幅表演音乐之声，只练二个月（好像二次/星期，半小时） -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2935193@0)

嗨,咱哪能跟她爸爸抢座啊,估计是特意飞回来捧宝贝女儿的场子的...等着看DVD啦...:) -yihan(逸涵); 2006-4-28 (#2935463@0)

建议弄一个MSN Space，把她的东西收集起来，以后她会很感激你的 :) 论坛里太散了。在MSN Space放上之后到这里邀朋呼友，大家就可以去留言... -benlin(默默的松鼠); 2006-4-28 (#2936244@0)

谢谢。 -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-28 (#2936272@0)

6岁半女儿小诗一首 -qianwanli(幸福猪第二); 2006-4-29 {194} (#2936731@0)
Trees

Trees are green, Trees are brown, Trees have color all around.
Trees are strong, Trees are long.
Trees belong to you and mom
Trees are bad, Trees are glad, Trees are even really sad.

WOW,真压韵啊,赞一个 -yihan(逸涵); 2006-5-2 (#2942198@0)

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7岁女儿做文 (女儿想famous, 她说二个同学上过报纸, 我让她自己想办法. 她说要建一网页(近7岁), 这个苯妈做不到. 我说到可以把你的作文贴到rolia, 她在期待有人读.)

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