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7岁女儿的work

THE FUNNY CAT AND SQUIRREL

Today there was a cat chasing a squirrel. The cat tried to follow the squirrel on the electric pole but it could not get to the squirrel. It hid behind a mail box. The squirrel went down. It thought it was safe. The cat chased it back up. Cat hid behind a bush but the squirrel understood. It crossed the wire on the pole. The cat saw it coming down on the other side and chased it on a windowsill. The squirrel had to come down. It ran away. Just then a car came out and the cat gave up and ran home.
They are smarter than I thought.
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  • 枫下家园 / 望子成龙 / 7岁女儿的work
    THE FUNNY CAT AND SQUIRREL

    Today there was a cat chasing a squirrel. The cat tried to follow the squirrel on the electric pole but it could not get to the squirrel. It hid behind a mail box. The squirrel went down. It thought it was safe. The cat chased it back up. Cat hid behind a bush but the squirrel understood. It crossed the wire on the pole. The cat saw it coming down on the other side and chased it on a windowsill. The squirrel had to come down. It ran away. Just then a car came out and the cat gave up and ran home.
    They are smarter than I thought.
    • 描写很细致,收入百宝箱第一文选..:)
      • 这些字拚写没错误,不知算不算好?
        • Her writing is excellent. Very good point " they are smarter than I thought ". You should be proud of her.......
          • 谢谢你的鼓励。还有一篇。
            DEAD RACCOON
            I saw a raccoon that was dead on the road. I think why it was dead because it was blind and looking for food for his family. Or maybe it was out taking a walk. I don’t know. Do you know why? I saw live raccoons in my backyard. They are light brown and dark brown.
            • 配上画可以当儿童读物了,大人读着象寓言呢...昨天明明读了第1篇,说小姐姐写得很好.