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我女儿,四年级,她的英文写作水平还可以,这是她在中国期间给老师写的中国见闻。从我和我女儿的经历来看,写作一是靠阅读,二是靠训练。如果有兴趣了解更多的话,可以PM我。

本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛A Letter from China

Dear Mrs. **,
I’m having a wonderful time at China. China is very different from Canada in many ways.
The place I am staying at is a city called Changzhou, which is in Eastern China’s Jiangsu Province. It is quite close to Shanghai, China’s largest city.
The place has cold weather but no snow. The coldness is actually inside the room because there are no air conditioners in some places. You’ll need 3 bed blankets when you sleep, and 4 layers of clothes!!!
The entertainment is also quite different. My aunt brought me to a place called Meiling. It costs ¥38 but in holidays, the price is ¥58 to be in there for ten hours. You could bathe, shower, eat food, do exercises, use computer, etc. …… I drank lots of water with watermelon pieces and also ate about half a dozen of sugar canes.
Almost all the streets are crowded and noisy and the traffic is always very busy. There are many high buildings on the both sides of the streets. I also find some interesting stores. Most stores sell a type of “pills” that have the same nutrition of milk and have different flavors, and other snacks are yogurt, jelly, chocolate and crackers…
The TV advisements are by far the longest, unordinary ads I’ve ever watched. The ads could be as long as 8 minutes and will give you some scary prices— a mobile telephone with a diamond and 23k gold for only ¥1997, a type of light-up mobile telephone that’s ¥298 and it has touchable screen, voice changer, and a whole list of features!!!
People celebrate Chinese Spring Festival in traditional ways. They light fireworks and sparklers and prepare tasty foods such as dumplings, rice cakes, sweet soup balls etc. My favorite food is rice cakes. They are sweet and sticky and tastes superb.
China is very interesting; it’s full of wonders and surprises. Some things seem surprisingly cheap, and some are awesomely expensive. Living at Changzhou, Jiangsu is great!
Give my best wishes to my classmates. I’m looking forward to returning to school!

Sincerely,更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
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  • 枫下家园 / 望子成龙 / 儿子12岁,英文写作是他的弱项,有知道何处有这个年龄段的英文写作提高或强化班的吗?
    • 听一些家长说过,如果真想见效快,还是需要私人补习。
    • 这好象是中国孩子的通病
      • My son 's writing is always b+, even though he read a lot of books. I also want to know which tutor is good to improve the writing for grade 5 student.
    • 多读书,以增加单词量和写作技巧。
    • 认识一个辅导写作非常好的老师,不知你住哪里, 合适的话,可以介绍给你
      • Could you PM me the contact info of 辅导写作非常好的老师 please? thx
      • 兔子, 我住MARKHAM, 请回话告知老师的姓名,电话及地址!谢谢!其实,路途无所谓的,估计每周也就跑一两趟!
      • I want to know the info as well. Please PM. Thanks.
      • could please you pm me?
      • I want to know too. PM please. Thanks!
      • 能介绍给我吗?多谢.
      • 因为辅导的作用对我孩子很明显, 我是心存感激才介绍这老师. 因为没和老师说过,怕给电话太唐突,我可以给个EMAIL 地址, 这也是我们最初的联系方式. 老师是西人.顺便说, 我孩子是读高中时辅导的.
        • 可以给我他的email么?多谢!
        • Can you give me the teacher's email address too? Thanks a lot!
        • Can you give me the teacher's email too? Thanks so much!!
        • 可以告诉我你的写作老师的联系方式吗?谢谢
        • 可以给我一个email吗,谢谢
        • 能否给我一份老师的联系方式吗?谢谢啦
        • pm me the email adress please, thanks!
        • Could you please give me teacher's email? thank you.
        • May I also have her email address please? Thank you very much.
        • 兔子,你好。刚看到这篇文章,我女儿今年入10年级,英语写作需要提高,麻烦你PM老师的联系方式。多谢了。
      • I would like to find a English teacher. Please introduce for me
      • Could you please give the contact info? Thanks!
      • 可以给我他的email么?多谢!
      • 能否也给我发一个老师的email?
    • try Kumon
      • 请问, Kumon真有效果吗?就是小孩子在那里做习题,然后,大孩子帮忙看看。那些习题chapter都有的卖。 没有什么特别的贬低它,只是,想多了解。小孩也快要上小学了。
        • Chapter卖的Kumon 练习题和Kumon Program的不一样。后者的非常系统,不参加他的班是不会给你的。是否有效,要看孩子,也取决于你的需求。
    • 我觉得跟提高中文写作水平差不多;多看书,泛泛地看,我觉得没什么特别的用,要按中国传统的做法,应该还是精度,甚至背诵;私人指点应该有用,但也只是小的修补
      • 是的,请家教做练习对提高语法,词汇量等确有帮助,也很重要。像我孩子写作技巧很好,写科幻类的小说很拿手,可写其它的要么是流水账,要么是泛泛而谈没内容,没内涵,深度不够。所以我觉得对大孩子而言,应该多一些MATURE FICTION & NON-FICTION READING
    • 我女儿,四年级,她的英文写作水平还可以,这是她在中国期间给老师写的中国见闻。从我和我女儿的经历来看,写作一是靠阅读,二是靠训练。如果有兴趣了解更多的话,可以PM我。
      本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛A Letter from China

      Dear Mrs. **,
      I’m having a wonderful time at China. China is very different from Canada in many ways.
      The place I am staying at is a city called Changzhou, which is in Eastern China’s Jiangsu Province. It is quite close to Shanghai, China’s largest city.
      The place has cold weather but no snow. The coldness is actually inside the room because there are no air conditioners in some places. You’ll need 3 bed blankets when you sleep, and 4 layers of clothes!!!
      The entertainment is also quite different. My aunt brought me to a place called Meiling. It costs ¥38 but in holidays, the price is ¥58 to be in there for ten hours. You could bathe, shower, eat food, do exercises, use computer, etc. …… I drank lots of water with watermelon pieces and also ate about half a dozen of sugar canes.
      Almost all the streets are crowded and noisy and the traffic is always very busy. There are many high buildings on the both sides of the streets. I also find some interesting stores. Most stores sell a type of “pills” that have the same nutrition of milk and have different flavors, and other snacks are yogurt, jelly, chocolate and crackers…
      The TV advisements are by far the longest, unordinary ads I’ve ever watched. The ads could be as long as 8 minutes and will give you some scary prices— a mobile telephone with a diamond and 23k gold for only ¥1997, a type of light-up mobile telephone that’s ¥298 and it has touchable screen, voice changer, and a whole list of features!!!
      People celebrate Chinese Spring Festival in traditional ways. They light fireworks and sparklers and prepare tasty foods such as dumplings, rice cakes, sweet soup balls etc. My favorite food is rice cakes. They are sweet and sticky and tastes superb.
      China is very interesting; it’s full of wonders and surprises. Some things seem surprisingly cheap, and some are awesomely expensive. Living at Changzhou, Jiangsu is great!
      Give my best wishes to my classmates. I’m looking forward to returning to school!

      Sincerely,更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
    • 有人在启发教育中心请过英文家教吗?效果如何?因为近千元的学费,价格不菲,投进去前总想了解清楚一点。
      • 我请过, 没效果,女儿也不喜欢. 我觉得这家店基本上说得很动听,当初说补习的老师本身是日校老师, 可后来才知道那个人根本就不是老师.
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