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@Calgary

兔

linyuxian(淋雨仙)
The wind must be blowing hard in the camp
Thousands of miles from here
Where you are serving the country for years now
Standing on the patio in the middle of the night
And looking into the north
Oh, How can I bear the chirps of the birds?
They are combing back but you are not.
It's getting cold here.
It must be even colder where you are.
Are you still wearing the same clothes I made for you?
So dusty and worn they must have been.
Useless they are, my iron and fragrance,
So deeply hidden in the closet
Who will wash and iron for you if I can't?
Where can I borrow a pair of wings?
I would fly fearlessly over the mountains
After mountains and reach you tonight
I would love the desert as our home
And love the cactuses as the orchards in the moonlight
I would dance tirelessly around you like a butterfly
Hold you, warm you and together with you
Watch snow falling from the sky
It would be a place closer to heaven than here
(#5492496@0)
Last Updated: 2009-8-18
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  • 枫下拾英 / 笔耕枫下 / 斑马斑马斑马 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-18 {322} (#5492483@0)
    斑马，顾名思义，一黑一白，一英一汉，斑文错落，互为表里。
    通俗的讲，就是英汉诗歌互译，传话接龙。每一个人要悄悄把自己的翻译传给下一个人
    ，由他（她）再转移成英文或旧体诗词。依次类推。这个游戏的要点在于随性发挥，不
    注重所谓信达雅，更注重再创作的过程，要注意有沿袭而不拘泥，特别注意不要让后面
    的作者轻易猜出你所翻译的原诗。
    • 原诗 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-18 {84} (#5492489@0)
      春恨

      钱珝


      久戍临洮报未归，箧香销尽别时衣。
      身轻愿比兰阶蝶，万里还寻塞草飞。
      • 草上飞？那也是山贼~ -luckygrass06(小草); 2009-8-18 (#5492588@0)
        • 犹记当年草上飞，铁衣着尽着僧衣--- 就是俺 -datura(带刀山贼); 2009-8-18 (#5493073@0)
    • 虎 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-18 {317} (#5492492@0)
      He has garrisoned in LinTao a long time,
      I haven't got his news.

      The scent of suitcase has vanished
      from those clothes he wearing.

      I wish I can lighten myself to be
      the butterfly flying around the orchids.

      I will fly over thousand miles
      to look for his figure alone the grass
      in the frontier fortress.
      • 第二句的翻译很有趣。“久戍临洮报未归，箧香销尽别时衣。身轻愿比兰阶蝶，万里还寻塞草飞”，第二句，“箧香销尽别时衣”，是指谁的“别时衣”呢？翻译是“he” 还是“she”？ -jjyy-jjyy(能吃能睡); 2009-8-18 (#5492744@0)
        • 自然是男生的衣服上带的体味啦 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-19 (#5493182@0)
    • 龙 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-18 {214} (#5492495@0)
      良人不见久， 万里戍边城。
      夜深起凭阑， 杳杳鸿雁声。
      思君身上衣， 大漠满胡尘。
      奈何香盈屉， 无从为君熏。
      何当化比翼， 一夕万重山。
      离离塞间草， 修修月下兰。
      妾为兰边蝶， 绕君长翩翩。
      同看胡笳雪， 共当胡地寒。
      • 这篇不错、、、 -zhangqilxf(贫道礼过去了、、、); 2009-8-19 (#5493287@0)
      • 炫耀 -jjyy-jjyy(能吃能睡); 2009-8-19 (#5493355@0)
        • 为啥是炫耀？ -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-19 (#5493829@0)
          • 俺来代答：男同学是炫耀，女同学是才情。 -datura(带刀山贼); 2009-8-19 (#5493847@0)
          • 既不忠实原著，也不收束性情。这叫翻译？ -jjyy-jjyy(能吃能睡); 2009-8-19 (#5493860@0)
    • 兔 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-18 {962} (#5492496@0)
      The wind must be blowing hard in the camp
      Thousands of miles from here
      Where you are serving the country for years now
      Standing on the patio in the middle of the night
      And looking into the north
      Oh, How can I bear the chirps of the birds?
      They are combing back but you are not.
      It's getting cold here.
      It must be even colder where you are.
      Are you still wearing the same clothes I made for you?
      So dusty and worn they must have been.
      Useless they are, my iron and fragrance,
      So deeply hidden in the closet
      Who will wash and iron for you if I can't?
      Where can I borrow a pair of wings?
      I would fly fearlessly over the mountains
      After mountains and reach you tonight
      I would love the desert as our home
      And love the cactuses as the orchards in the moonlight
      I would dance tirelessly around you like a butterfly
      Hold you, warm you and together with you
      Watch snow falling from the sky
      It would be a place closer to heaven than here
      • 兔子这是重新诠释演绎呢 -datura(带刀山贼); 2009-8-18 (#5493049@0)
        • 气龙的才叫重新演绎呢 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-19 (#5493183@0)
    • 潮 -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-18 {250} (#5492497@0)
      风烈战营千山远，
      君别报国七年间。
      凭栏北眺夜如墨，
      只闻雁回不见君。
      秋凉如水北国寒，
      经年布袄可护暖？
      谁能为君洗尘沙？
      空看针线藏柜间。
      请借双翼飞重山，
      大漠荆棘安家园。
      我舞蝶翩月作灯，
      我憩君暖雪飞山。
      何必万里思君夜，
      不如沙场共苦甘。
      • 刚硬了些、、、 -zhangqilxf(贫道礼过去了、、、); 2009-8-19 (#5493286@0)
    • try -blue_bird(蓝鸢); 2009-8-19 {102} (#5493302@0)
      long time he had gone
      yet she still stays alone
      how high is a butterfly
      can reach the border's sky
      • 我家老猪～ -jjyy-jjyy(能吃能睡); 2009-8-19 (#5493356@0)
      • zan -linyuxian(淋雨仙); 2009-8-19 (#5493834@0)

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