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枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 话说前回,众心潭才佳呕心沥血之卜算子集锦,俺回了首XX之作,似惹众怒,眼瞅着不呕点啥是没法在心潭混了...查了下词牌似这个最简陋,比较适合我,...胡编几句先应付一下...五言绝句 静塘会五言绝句 静塘会
by BillNi (咱们移民是首歌)
虫鸟竞独鸣, 鱼蛙相对语。
忽来风雨声, 鱼沉蛙入水。
-billni(咱们移民是首歌);
2008-7-30
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听过这首歌么幽道小池塘
芦笛迎风响
稻菽点头望
亲切又慈祥
林间小路上
晨雾浴朝阳
看看彩云飞
听听鸟歌唱
-blue_bird(piggy);
2008-7-30
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好家伙,比俺的还多四句,张嘴就来呀,朱词绝非浪得虚名...还真没听过?谁唱的?....
-billni(咱们移民是首歌);
2008-7-30
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挺绝的
-coffeehouses(咖啡);
2008-7-30
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看走眼,还以为说俺挺艳的呢...
-billni(咱们移民是首歌);
2008-7-30
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